All Comments on 'Swimming Pool Eyes'

I swear im totally in love with u and ur writing! ur stories are so amazing and this one is no different. Do NOT ever stop! Brilliant!!!

the style of your writing sometimes reminds me a little of work by Anais Wannabe on AFF

hey whats the secret of pool eyes cmon! i got to knw! let me thinking a lot..........

I don't know why but I love this story

Okay so swimming pool eyes was the title... and Nick has swimming pool eyes... and the doctor has swimming pool eyes... and... hypnosis? Maybe? I don't know. Meh. I liked it though.

I absolutely loved this and never have I been so intrigued by a story that I don't kind of skip ahead to the sex. But you did a great job building my anticipation and desire for the climax. Superb work and one of the best I read. Off to read more of your stories!