All Comments on 'Swing Club Night'

Good story. Reminds me of a club I visited in Germany, but no overnights there. Good flow. I would like to see a followup to this story.

Not one line of dialogue. Come on!!

Wait, "Arnie let out an even louder "oooh"." And a couple "aahhhs"

Fuck me, when will people realize that dialogue in quotations is an essential writing tool that brings stories alive, making them much more palpable?!?

"shut up and fuck"

Wow..... Where did you come from to imagine this place?

Too much... too often.... too rampant! I can't imagine anyone enduring this with any sense of pleasure past the first encounter.