All Comments on 'Swingers Gone Wild'

I have pretty much liked most most of your stories, with the exception of The Return of the Gangbang Queen and this one.

sorry... :(

his friend got to fuck his mom before he did? Not cool. too much of a slut for me. How could he ever love her. It's like being the last one in a train.

"I don't know he didn't tell me he wanted it to be a surprise. Crap! Cindy did we log out of the laptop that's connected to the TV?!"

Cam you count how many different sentences you crammed into one? And that's only TYPICAL of your writing, whether it's dialog or narration. Adding commas and periods, seemingly at random, with no grasp of where and how you SHOULD be punctuating is embarrassing to read.

Every damn page had her professing her Love,

While fucking everyone she knows...

Saying repeatedly how she would only be his

And "Continue to fuck everyone in town" because

they don't really count.....

Author if you want your main story character to

be likeable. You don't turn him into a second hand

cuckold. And if that is your intention then put it in

the tags. So I and others can avoid that cheaply

written crap!

Nicely built, some hot characters and a reluctant son. Just the way it's supposed to be. :)

Unlike your detractors—concerned with punctuation and morality—I found this story hypnotic in it's complete immersion into a world of sexuality, pleasure, and carnal excess that all the characters, except for James, are totally comfortable with. So the story is about the seduction of James not only by his mother Cindy but by the whole community of swingers steeped in the delights of orgiastic, orgasmic community engagement. The tension in the story is between the community of sensate pleasure with no care about moral and social mores and James who is filled with the reservations more common in human society of, amongst other issues, not fucking your mother or son. The story is about how the experience of pleasure is used to destroy James’ reservations with the full approval of his father, Cindy's husband.

The departure from standard punctuation practices, rather than distracting me, added to the sense of a sea of sensuality as sudden shifts in the action were like being caught in successive waves which washed away what was happening in the sudden appearance of another act that sprung out of the previous act.

What a fucking joy it was to get lost in the undisciplined pursuit of please as the precum oozed from my cock and helped me to enhanced the pleasure I felt through five pages of my surrender to my own carnality.

I just don't get why people come to a site of stories about all forms of sexuality and waste time being morally correct and self-righteous. Just enjoy your sexual expression that these stories engender or move on.

Once again you fulfilled my wish and wrote a helluva story. :)

You're welcome amachi

great story and a good read hope there is another part to the story coming

I ALWAYS love your stories because your mc is likeable but he was too weak and she was too much of a loose woman for me to think much of her other than she sex love not him

At least Lorencino got what the story was about.

I never vote more than 2 ⭐️ when the son has to share his mom! I even I get jealous!

Agreed, why the son has to share his mother . Just 1 star. They have treated him as a second class citizen and she thought of her son only after fucking her friends son to a core. Come on feel sorry for him atleat

Now I know that you “ended” it .....But there is so much more that can be done and would be so hot to do, with Cindy so infatuated with him, then make her find out the kink that most sons have of knocking their mom up. Or better yet find out it turns him on finding out his friend got Bethany knocked up. You can even drown him down further by having his dad “talk” to him about being the man of the house and how it’s ok that he is taking “care” of his wife(his mom). Or better accidentally knock up his friends mom and have Cindy get jealous and want to be knocked up too

Oh yes, so truly enjoyed this one...I read it twice today and loved it both times!

I forgot how good this story was, this is the second time I read it and it doesn't disappoint. I thought you would have done another chapter about them swinging. I can't stop reading your stories.

You have a few common names and one not so common. People you know or wish you could have in real life? Breathtaking story.

the point of incest is the familial relationship. having him call his mom by her name kinda kills the mood

Son is the last guy to fuck her? More Group Sex than Incest/Taboo.

Nope several things wrong with this story. One incest relationships are about obsession not sharing. The son would end up being jealous of Josh for having his mother especially behind his back and before him. James would get jealous of his father or any man fucking his mom. That is how incest works. They become very possessive of the incest partner.

Then there is James first time having sex in a swinger meeting with a group of people watching? That ruined the story. Sorry it started off good but ended badly.

When's the next part coming?

Good story glad Cindy got what she wanted and James got what he wanted fantastic maybe Cindy can end up having a baby from James

Good erotic story. No guilt, just all out fucking. That's what you expect from Literotica.