by devilsden79
Very nice. Good pace and somehow I can really see both the people and the place.
You have a very nice way of telling this hot (pun intended) story. Surely some will criticize your grammar, but the mistakes seem to be born of carelessness, not ignorance. I gave you 5 stars and can't wait for your next, or continued, story.
I loved this story, i think i have gone to the same place,
I would love for you to finish it to see what happens next....
had to norice, though, that the dry sauna turned to steam a few paragraphs later.