All Comments on 'Swinging Date with the In-laws'

Learn how to spell!

Liked the story. Spelling and grammar detract from it.

the grammer and spelling kinda ruined it for me..I would love to correct you ...for your next story..send me an email at sammi_535@msn.com and it would be my pleaSure to correct your English grammer ect,

I think the wrong category though, which will also lower the hits. I would've gone with loving wives or group.

However, if you're a native speaker, it's hard to find proof. After a bit, I wasn't sure if his name was Joseph or Joesph. Countless their/there/they're, to/too, then/than, etc. errors. I couldn't find a paragraph without faults. Seriously, find a proofreader next time. That many errors are like potholes in a road, making it impossible to enjoy the ride.

...don't use someone who can't spell "grammar" as your proofreader.

If the topic of story wasn't inside you're capabiilties, whenthere fore you decide typing home language good. Post more stories (don ot if you know what's good for you), because if you do, I will rend thee in the gobberwarts with my blurglecruncheon, see if I don't!

I like the idea, and it seams believable. Keep writing.

Check your work before you post! I couldn't make sense of your story because of all the misspelling and obviously missing words. So next time, read your story through before you post it.

Should of put her on her back got on top rammed her cunt make her scream then pumped sperm into her get her knocked up watch your wife get knocked up