All Comments on 'Swinging in France: The Party'

Excellent story, and very well told with an unusual French flavor. Needs a bit more editing for a few missed words, but the grammar, punctuation and spelling were all quite well done. All in all, a fine job and most enjoyable reading. Clearly deserves a high rating.

So fucking hot I wish I could get an invite, I would love to perform like tat

Hmmm. Even though the sex scenes were pretty well written, there was virtually no character development. I just read the story and couldn’t tell you the name of any character. I didn’t care about any of the players. They might as well have been robots. You have serious skills but you need to make your characters come to life.

There were no feelings generated in this story. It was akin to opening a playboy magazine, where the pics were hot but you knew nothing about the model. Keep writing. You’ll get there ! Gave it a 4, but the 5’s will come in time.