All Comments on 'Swinging in the Decades'

by 4glory6

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elling50elling50over 10 years ago

This was a very beautiful and well written story. Liked it very much.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Liked story development

An interesting idea, capturing couples at intervals in their history. Would have liked more description of the sexual acts that Pete and Ellie (?) enjoyed with each other (like how she enjoyed Pete eating her because this was something new for her or when he fucked her ass which was not new but she enjoyed) but also know that makes the story much longer. Still loved the writing and hope to see more submissions from you!

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