All Comments on 'Swinging on the Fourth of July'

this has me excited for the other half of the story cant wait for you to post the rest of it

But was it fouth of July or Labor Day?

How refreshing to read story with a healthy dose of realism. You portrayed the emotions of the main characters very well, such a contrast to the tiring predictability of most stories. You know, HUGE cocks, HUGE balls, HUGE tits and so on. Great, and now, on to the sequel!