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linnearlinnearalmost 5 years ago
One Wild Story

I loved all the parts of this story. It was so very well written and great detailed descriptions.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Good job. I think I would leave it there. My opinion. If you do write more, I would keep it in the first person, get one of your hottie's to proofreader it. Lot of name changes and grammar errors. Either way start writing again.

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