All Comments on 'Swinging Quickie'

Nice story. It has plenty of room to grow, with the studs getting more into each other, with a DP and double BJ, and then going into going at it with each other. Hot.

It's a good start to a series of chapters, where you and your wife have a lot of hot sex. Thanks for the post....Rich

No tension. Perfect looking guy makes it with perfect looking Sweetie who had Hubby ask him. Everybody had a good time. Author portrayed it adequately.

Wish I had been there, preferably as the Bull. Will I ever re-read this submission? Not if I can remember how boring it is!

According to the King of Swing, this ain’t swinging. Husband is a cuck, and wife is a whore.

26thNC is right of course. I fully expected the husband to fuck Chris arse, i found it a waste of time, when he didn't, 2*

Wo ! What just happened ? I blinked and almost missed it. Talk about wham bam thank you mam ! Was the wife involved in anything but being a cum dump ? Hi, how are ya, lets fuck.

No build up, no tension, virtually no character development. You have lots of potential, but usually quickies will not garner good ratings. Your actual writing is good, just needs some polish. Keep trying. You’re going to be one of the really good ones someday.