by PMDlite
Fun romp - just in time for a camping trip. I think I know what I will be reading around the campfire!
I've been reading a lot of the Halloween entries and I really really liked this one. Excellent writing, classic Halloween premise, fun and enjoyable! Great wook!
I would love to write the sequel to this story, with Deb and John going back a year later because of dreams they were having. What do you say PMDlite? Your story line is perfect, with great editing. Well done!
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