All Comments on 'Swordplay'

I hope that there's another chapter to this story....its rather interesting with the swordplay and all.

Hey, Jen. Even though I usually don't read Dom/sub or SciFi/Fantasy stories, I liked yours a lot. Very dark and erotic, and the use of the sword spoke to me on a deep level. I LOVED the descriptions you used for the penetration, and I wish that I could write that moment as vividly as you do. Congrats, and keep up the good work.

I almost never read stories here in Lit unless a friend refers me to one. It was the title "Swordplay" on your signature line that had me curious fieryjen. I enjoyed it immensley ,with particular reference to the use of the sword being held as a form or restraint, that rocked. Thank you for sharing.

@}-}rebecca----

This story meshes a very potent sexual power dynamic with a sci-fi/fantasy theme. The idea of swordplay is archetypal, and ties everything together mythically and sexually. Bravo!

I'm not usually into the whole pain/cutting thing, but this story's a very good one.

Absolutely beautiful imagery

Thank you!

Maharat

So mysterious and beautiful i almost wished I was her.

... is NOT beautiful.

very good descriptions, odd scenario, but i liked it alot. good job