All Comments on 'SX69 - Ultimate Love Potion Ch. 03'

you keep using the same language over and over. Yes, we know 12 hours is the longest he has went without sex since meeting Sara and so on! Also how could he smell the other women on the plane to England when he was on a private jet? Gave this part a 3. Hopefully repetiton is held to a minimum...though I think it will get worse....here's hoping not.

Not going to finish the first page when you forgot a 2-letter word early on!