All Comments on 'Sylvia's Mom Pt. 06'

The author got every virginity/defloration meme known to 21st century man into the story.

There was no suspense, no plot - nada Two stars

I apologize for being such a failure as a writer.

Perhaps you will enlighten us by sharing with all of us the "proper procedure" in one own stories.

Just ignore the haters, this is a very good series, keep up the good writing!

I welcome ALL feedback be it positive or negative.

YOU are AWESOME! Without readers there is NO reason to write.

Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!

Michael

I'm really enjoying this story. I would like the chapters longer but that's just me. Keep up the good work.

I dig the concept of this story and have read every part because of that. However, man, it's damn near impossible to get into simply because the dialogue from Michael is ridiculously stupid.

He's a young guy. Why does he speak like a 50 year old in the 1930s?

Literally no one speaks this way, especially someone of his supposed age.

I'm pushing 70 years old. Thanks for commenf.

I challenge my haters.

I'm so old I don't even have a cell phone.

Under 70 you are an infant

What is a cellphone?

When you are young your prick is always stiff - when you get old it is the only part that is not!

Liked the story 4*

Thanks so much for your comment!

You work for 50yrs and retire with a warehouse full of condoms and Viagra and all day to use them......

Then some fucking doctor tells you your blood pressure is too high for sex more than once a week.

That's getting old!

Fortunately, I have a 22 year old Latina girlfriend who has enough patience and determination to "cure" my erectile dysfunction.

Excellent story but please don’t let it get out of hand and let it have a great ending!!