by MaliciousAI
This chapter was much better. You write sex scenes well especially the neighbor getting it from the servants. Not sure if your going to dive into the sci fi aspect of the story but if you do, a little back story on the aliens would be great. And with Paul basically being the ruler of earth what else besides sexual needs can or will he indulge in???? Great story potential here!
This is even better than the first chapter. Keep on writing, I really like the potential this set of characters has.