All Comments on 'Syn's Eden'

Wow, this is lovely. I can tell that English isn't your first language, but I also know there are many people who can help you with the editing. Thank you for this lovely tale.

I was so happy to see a new story from you! Having read most of your other tales of transfemmes and the femmes who love them. Was surprised to see Pgh. used as the home town as I am living near there now. Hope to see much more from you in the future! Don't worry about a few minor typos or grammatical errors, I have seen way worse used by writers not half as talented or imaginative.

Appreciatively,

TRG81

I paused this story to allow myself to come to terms with the trajectory. Sarah future is in my mind and the story will continue.

Please read Lenia's Return and offer your opinions.

MQ