All Comments on 'Systems Engineer Ch. 03'

by Beatnic_jazzman

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Abrupt ending

I am enjoying the story, but I so wish you wouldn't just cut off in the middle of something like you've got a strict word limit to adhere to. It is ruining the flow of the story.

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