All Comments on 'T-Girl Fantasy Island Pt. 01'

One of the best!

Keep it up :-)

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I think this must be more than a fantasy. It is so real the writer must have also reveled in such delightful experiences. A real turn-on. This is my kind of action

Like most stories on Literotica, you could use a proofreader. Your word choice is repetitive to the point of distraction. For example, you use the word soft to describe Keiko a bit too much... in the same paragraph. Also, we get the dom/sub theme. There is no need to repeatedly use that description over and over on your characters. Rather then telling us they are dominant, have them be dominant. Aside from those issues, it is a fun enough romp.

Wonder if they could use a slightly older maid, male bisexual that wants to be fucked like the other servants, what a good way to start the day, or end which ever I just love cock. More please this is just a start right? da.cd@frontier.com