by chanstevens
Loved the moment when her spunk-filled ass is lowered over Chan and she licks it all out. Fucking cock-bursting!
I don't like the stories where a member of the relationship cheats, like Emma and mr.butt, it should've been kept normal then teased and self pleasured,
Also the second person threw me off at first, dialogue is extremely helpful and a third person pov is better. Like a narrator as opposed to the males perspective from his mind
I hate stories in the 'you' form. It is so unnatural for a story. It is a form that for some reason or another slipped into modern writing. I advise everybody never to fall into that trap.