All Comments on 'Table Manners'

There was no build up of characters or idea of storyline except them screwing. If your intent was for a stroke story good job, if you were looking for more, than you still have some work to do. Sorry if I sound harsh, just wanted to be honest. Good luck!

No build up to the story. Pity, as I feel that you have potential as a writer. Try looking at the styles of some of those who receive good comments or high marks

Not every short story has to have a beginning a middle and an end. We meet this couple at their most intimate momment. What a way to grab your attention. The end has also been left open for further development.

Good luck Artiemus, I look forward to your next story.

Regards Sam