All Comments on 'Taboo 2013 Ch. 01'

Not a bad story but a little short, some spelling errors also exist. While the errors are minor in a longer story they can detract from the pace of the story. Not bad

Two many spelling and grammar errors made this story lose the eroticism expected for this website. 2 stars is the best I can do for this - but with a good editor it could maybe been rated 4 stars.

Do us all a favor do not write anymore!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!