All Comments on 'Taboo Series Ch. 01'

Hot, and looking forward to getting hotter.

yes give her more now she needs anal maybe she can make some girl friends to bring in too

Great visual depiction of real hot sex. I loved it when she rolled him over, mid-fuck, and started riding him again.

A little more backround on why Jamie was suddenly fucking her uncle (her inner thoughts and desires) probably would have made it even better, but it sounds like that's something your going to cover in future chapters.

Great story though, I'll be keeping my eye out for the next chapter. Thanks!

So GOod!!! i loved it cant wait for more. next time anal then maybe a surprise visit to his brothers sometime. doing it in his brothers house with him there would really be naughty. so good loved it. keep it going

I voted a 5 and rated it a 100. I don't know how i can vote higher when you introduce the anal! All I can say is Hot! More!! Now!!! PLEASE!!!!!

Write more in an EXPEDIANT manner. It sucked me right in.

great. Sounded like you were relating your fantasy fuck

more please

Very good loved the story line and details. Please write more.

Watch the typos and California begins with a CAPITALIZED C. There are lots of errors like that in here. Take the time to edit, PLEASE, if you are seriously trying to write something. You have talent. Do it right.

very enticing & hot, love the story so far. cant wait to read more.

I am so hard and the pre-cum is dripping out of me like mad. I am about to shoot my load, but I want to read Ch 2 before I cum.

Great story, but Sugar, you really need to find an editor.

I agree with anonymous. It was a really good story but it needed an editor or at least a spell checker. There were moments where I wasn't sure if this was about his niece or nephew...

And a very pretty red head to boot!

But predictable for this venue

Niece sex is one of my personal fantasies. Loved your story.