All Comments on 'Taipei Tryst Pt. 01'

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ariesgirlariesgirlabout 9 years ago

Very descriptive and nicely written. Some I skipped through because there was so much to read to experience what they were feeling but I enjoyed it.

MissCleo1976MissCleo1976about 9 years ago
mmm

Very descriptive and good.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

Don't write in POV. It takes away from your story.

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