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DragonCoboltDragonCoboltover 6 years agoAuthor
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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Ha, you did it again.

Another development and a cunning plot twist. And the Astartes mistaken for a murder servitor, fabulous. I've often wondered in my own Deathwatch campaign how well an Astartes could masquerade as an Ogryn! I must say Salamanders were a good choice over other less socialising Chapters. But then you pulled the bait and switch! Hmm, Black armour? And just when I had him pegged as an Alpha Legionary.

As always, great work. Keep it up, DC.

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