by Missydotnet
Good story , made even better by reading your Bio first, such a naughty girl, so sexual and submissive
Ferocious love and so much to learn from each other . Steamy tale of secret desires .
Thank you for a beautifully written and presented story, it brought reality home to me. One of the best I have read.
I hope you continue to write, without turning this relationship with your Dad into something that is unbelievable.
Your mix of lust and internal conflict of emotions was a great balance.
This young lady has, in my considered opinion, a great future as a writer of erotic fiction.
This story seemed so believable, I thought I was reading a confession of sorts.
The biography did little to assuage that thought.
5/5
That was fucking hot! 5 stars! Keep writing, u have a tallent for it.
NOW THIS IS WHAT I CALL TAKEING CARE OF HER(HIS DAUGHTER) THIS WAS NICE GREAT STORY THAT JUST KEEPS YOU READING ,YOU JUST KEEP COMING BACK TO IT TO MAKE DAM SURE YOU DIDN'T MISS ANYTHING,, GREAT STORY
I GIVE A 5 PLUS STARS ........................................."R".........................
P.S. I LOVED THE ENDING,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,"R"...........................
Mmmm.....loved the build up, made me so wet. Wish my daddy took me like that.
I loved it! The only regret I have is that I reached the end. Would love to read more. Perhaps she can take care of him next time?
What a great story with true love and hot, hot sex. Loved it!
I love a good Daddy Daughter story where they make love, not just fuck.
Don't get me wrong, I love being fucked by my Daddy, but sometimes we enjoy making love.