All Comments on 'Take Care'

by Missydotnet

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
love it

Came twice during this story. Amazing

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Good story , made even better by reading your Bio first, such a naughty girl, so sexual and submissive

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Softy

Ferocious love and so much to learn from each other . Steamy tale of secret desires .

CassieKCassieKover 12 years ago
My mirror!

Thank you for a beautifully written and presented story, it brought reality home to me. One of the best I have read.

I hope you continue to write, without turning this relationship with your Dad into something that is unbelievable.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Great story

Your mix of lust and internal conflict of emotions was a great balance.

imharmless69imharmless69over 12 years ago
Fantastic

Hope to read more from you.

rafman188rafman188over 12 years ago
What a great start!

This young lady has, in my considered opinion, a great future as a writer of erotic fiction.

This story seemed so believable, I thought I was reading a confession of sorts.

The biography did little to assuage that thought.

5/5

ErosnessErosnessover 12 years ago
Great

What a great story. Thank you so much for sharing.

hornychick617hornychick617over 12 years ago
Great!!

That was fucking hot! 5 stars! Keep writing, u have a tallent for it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
excellent

just excellent. keep it coming

daddygoesdeepdaddygoesdeepover 12 years ago
Wow

My cock is still bone hard. What a lucky Daddy you have.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
GREAT CARE

NOW THIS IS WHAT I CALL TAKEING CARE OF HER(HIS DAUGHTER) THIS WAS NICE GREAT STORY THAT JUST KEEPS YOU READING ,YOU JUST KEEP COMING BACK TO IT TO MAKE DAM SURE YOU DIDN'T MISS ANYTHING,, GREAT STORY

I GIVE A 5 PLUS STARS ........................................."R".........................

P.S. I LOVED THE ENDING,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,"R"...........................

DaddysLittleRoseDaddysLittleRosealmost 12 years ago

Mmmm.....loved the build up, made me so wet. Wish my daddy took me like that.

lll_BareBear_llllll_BareBear_lllover 11 years ago
WOW!

I loved it! The only regret I have is that I reached the end. Would love to read more. Perhaps she can take care of him next time?

TangarayTangarayover 11 years ago

such a good story. Keep writing, such a turn on.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
i had a dream like this!

What a great story with true love and hot, hot sex. Loved it!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I love a good Daddy Daughter story where they make love, not just fuck.

Don't get me wrong, I love being fucked by my Daddy, but sometimes we enjoy making love.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This is it?? Not much of a story!!

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