All Comments on 'Take Me After The Ol' Ball Game'

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taxpapabobtaxpapabobover 14 years ago
Take Me After the Ball Game

A very nice, SUPERSEXY but gently told romance. They may indeed be soul mates -- sequel would be nice, but clean up grammatical and syntactic errors, please. These people have powerful sex engines.

PrincessErinPrincessErinover 14 years ago
Cute

A cute story although her breast size was a distraction. Good luck in the contest.

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