by Darkniciad
After reading Danica, I need more plot and action. This is to sickly sweet. I need somebody to kick some ass.
I think you have a lot of talent there man, just let it flow out.
I hate it when the suspence of waiting for the bad you think is going to happen overrides the hot steamy sex. Toby reminds me of Kronk. Yumm. N O T H I N G could ever replace my wonderful Teddybear of a hubby; but Kronk.......mmmmmmm! Ok I'd do a lot to be in a room with ALL of them at play, if only to watch, but still... Danica as a flavor....Eh...eh....right! I'm dizzy now! So many dirty thoughts! Hay would it be to far fetched if Toby killed Tubby Taxguy by shoving a large fish up his.......well, anyway I love the story. Thanks.