All Comments on 'Take Me Now'

Very engaging story. You could have ended before the third page and I would have been satisfied; "She dropped the shirt on the ground, in only her bra from the waist up. Flash. Flash." End.

That is not to say it would have been better if you hadn't cemented the relationship as you continued the story. Thanks for a great read.

Great story you are very talented.

Thanks! I really enjoyed reading this one. Hot to be sure, but the build-up was also great.

Keep 'em coming!

I've read many stories here, you are definately in the top tier of writers. Your story had me riveted and made me feel as if I was right there in the middle of it. Well done! I look forward to more.