All Comments on 'Take Only as Directed Ch. 01'

keep up the writing!!!

So rich people basically pay to turn their clients into sex slaves with the money they owe, nice!

If you plan on several chapters, don't add seven thousand characters. This one, a Master, and possibly one more. More characters would need their own story arcs.

The story seems a bit like a female clockwork orange

I normally don't like stories that are set in a wildly unbelievable setting but this is really interesting. I think even without graphic sexual stuff this would make a good story/movie/novel/TV series about dystopian future. I look forward to reading more.

Good start

Very well written. Premise strikes me as more plausible than many on this site.