All Comments on 'Taken'

Big fan of this story! The writer has a good grasp of erotica. The girl in the story sounds like a sexy piece of ass! Woukdnt mind taking her too!

If she's only wearing panties, how does she pull her top down. Please find an editor.

Says she's wearing a top in the second paragraph. Good to know you are paying attention to details. But thanks for the criticism. Hope to read your anonymous story soon!

Very good story! Quick, hard, and fast. Nice! Keep up the good work.

Love your story. Well written (so many are NOT), and very enjoyable. Sounds as though this is written from a favorite scene! Keep up the good work. Looking forward to your other stories.

If I could give this 10 stars, I would. This is a huge turn on. The perfect way to end a day... any day. The story is perfect (to me), and the telling of the story pulled me in completely.

I really liked this story. Nice details and fast-paced.