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All Comments on 'Taken'

by Ladyluck

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

boring and totally unrealistic. more effort required

lordchilworthlordchilworthover 15 years ago
well done

well writen, good storyline.. very few syntax errors... it's been a long time.. have you lost the need to write?... thank you for what you've given already

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Anal Love

Absolutely great I loved it keep it up.

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I've been writing for awhile now...I enjoy reading as well as writing...please only serious feedback...thank you....