by ZeypherValkyrie
awesome story! keep them coming. love these hermione stories so much!!!!
loved the story, woulda been nice to make it a five some with harry and ron
great story, but for one flaw that simply relates to the books:
Dumbledore shouldn't be there. :-P
other than that, thumbs up.
I didn't like Dumbledore's involvement. I prefer people the same sort of age, but thats just my preference. Apart from that I loved it. Putting a realistic swing on Harry and Ron's dialogue was cool.