All Comments on 'Taken'

Your words have brought to life what a lot of women, and men; need, want and desire.

The words of Your writing seeps within the soul of those who need and ache for the "ravishment", without truly understanding what it is they search for.

It brought tears to my eyes to see that One can express the words that touched a part of my soul that i knew was there, but did not understand. Now i do. Thank You, Kind Sir

Thank you for the experience. The intoxication of your words, imagination and realism were scrumptious. I look forward to reading your work in the future.

SM

This was an inspired story. I learned a lot about a special type of kink that I did not know much about and her own struggles to deal with it explained it so much the better. You are a gifted writer

That was a brilliant story. You explained your ideas with such detail and understanding and put into words some of my own conflicts. I also loved the poetry. Thank you sharing.

this is the first time I've enjoyed a story enough to comment on it, please write more!!! This is so much like my own fantasies except that I like guys with long dark hair not short red!!!

Excellent storing, writing, imagination. My fantasy exactly. Thank you.

this was just simply beautiful i felt like i was ravished myself i just ask that we get a story with the neice

This is what I would call a first class example of an erotic story. Sexy without attempting to catalogue in detail every sexual act known to man. Congratulations!

A wonderful exploration of the erotic, long enough to develop a sympathetic heroine and engagement in her quest.

Thank you very much for sharing your story.

Normally stories of domination and punishment hold no attraction for me, but this story of domination really held me, possibly more to see the outcome than anything else. In the end I thoroughly enjoyed it, thank-you.

Passion AND romance. One of the best I've read. A shame there is only one other story.

Fantastic "coming of age" story. Beautifully written. Not overly erotic, but full of sensual feelings.

This is one of the strongest 'Female Driven' stories I have ever read Online. It is easily a Quintuple 5 Star winner.

Every time I read it. Fortunate Margaret and fascinating Jared.

Oh, Jared, where are you? You know Margaret/Miranda are not the only ones who want to be ravished.

THIS story gets it. Breathtaking and enlightening. Thank you writer.