All Comments on 'Taken at a Party Pt. 03'

1* why be married to someone elses fuck toy?

>90% negative, nay flaming, comments and yet it continues?

In my book the writer has now opened the door for personal attacks of her/his character and mental status. The complete lack of writing quality is already established.

It must be difficult writing this while living in moms basement. One of.the worst I've read here.Keep.going you obviously get off on self flagellation.Last comment

Why not put this is Fetish where it belongs.Humiliation is just nothe erotic.But you know that don't you moron

She clearly doesn't like him. Hell, he's not even in the friend zone.

a new chapter every day! this is so hot!! thank you!! maybe he can suck his wife's toes as aaron fucks her better than he ever could.

psychopath |ˈsīkəˌpaTH|

noun

a person suffering from chronic mental disorder with abnormal or violent social behavior.

• informal an unstable and aggressive person: schoolyard psychopaths will gather around a fight to encourage the combatants.

Not talking about the author necessarily but those like kidg1000 in crave more and more humiliation. Please get some help or get back on your meds.

This is NOT erotica this is pathology. Nothing wrong with erotica, even cheating wives stories but this is vile.

NO, I didn't read a word but I did read KidG's comment and hope that he or she will get some help or at least get taken out of circulation. Probably be good for the "author" (and I use the term loosely) as well.

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Where else could it go? She demeans, degrades and humiliates him. She obviously doesn't love or respect him. Why would he stay with the bitch? Stupid story, worse ending.

Where is it going to lead? I just can't get past how someone could be humiliated like this and tolerate it whether in real life or a story. A stable person with at least some self-respect and a modicum of respect for their family is going to take this!

Time to kick that bitch to the curb and for him to seek some therapy and get one with life. Everyone deserves common courtesy and civility!

Chagrined

JUST STOP

Quote: "This is NOT erotica this is pathology. Nothing wrong with erotica, even cheating wives stories but this is vile."

I couldn't agree more. If someone finds this shit erotic they really need to get a self esteem checkup!

Stop, stop now!

This should go in gay or something besides here, hope you are not allowed around children.

I guess it must be his autobiography and his wifey wants to make sure he keeps putting the bullshit out there. If that's the case he needs to dump the bitch, grab his balls out of that jar before he kicks her ass out of their home and mans up!

Please do not continue with this shit!

This story was and still is sad, but sadder is to keep writing it...1*

Crawl back under the sewer pipe from which you escaped from.

dont listen to these assholes who are pissed off that this is their life. and you actually had the balls to write about it. I cant wait for part 4.

would have walked up to the bed and punched as hard as could in his balls then dragged him out of bed and kicked the last single fuck out of his nut sack then stood on and popped them and told her she was just a cunt and she could have him and walked out and left the simpering pair of arseholes together

even if she wanted to also enjoy his cock, she should be respectful of you... she isn't, she is just saying "Fuck You" if you don't like it.. all her way with no respect at all

I wasn't expecting him to get to watch her making out. Lucky him. I wish I was him...

Yep, if I said it once, I have said it a million times. You must be sick to read something you do not like. Simply go read a different genre and post your hatred elsewhere. I personally can relate to much of this, but remain a cuckold wannabe...although I'm not sure. The entire story has me very excited. Thank you. Jimmy

Humiliation of husband looks fake. They must have planned it but there are no clues. So Wife going out of her way to humiliare her hubby looks fake.

and for that *

You don't pick your women very well do youl, get your premature ejaculation sorted and the they'll most likely not go for sex elsewhere. Or you'll be a frustrated cuck the rest of your life

Great story

Need more chapters.

You are curious to see that you are now a cuck and dear Marta is a whore.

Cuck is listening to his whore entertain another man.

I am copy pasting an earlier comment:

"BrendaNW - about 6 years ago

she is being a bitch

even if she wanted to also enjoy his cock, she should be respectful of you... she isn't, she is just saying "Fuck You" if you don't like it.. all her way with no respect at all"

OMG the cucks are having a melt down. The willing cuckoldry must turn their crank. Disgusting story for disgusting readers. One Star. People like that should be castrated so they can't reproduce. The world got enough cucks already don't need more. 1* of course,

Baseball bat,

would fix it for you.

We were out with friends well one of the guy's were a friend. Anyway at the end of the night night I was the DD. Sam my friend was setting with me in the front seat his wife Sally was at work. Jill my wife Joe an asshole that I thought was a friend and Robert another asshole I thought was a friend were in the back. Sam looked over at me and gave me a look that asked me what the Hell? I knew exactly what he meant. At least if not both assholes were messing with Jill. I reached for his hand and squeezed it on the handle. I took it he knew what I meant. To hold on. He had told me earlier that it wasn't any of his business but he had seen both guy's messing with Jill. I knew the road and slammed on the breaks and yelled deer turned the steering wheel. We hit the ditch and damn near rolled over. When we stopped the 3 in the back were moaning. I called 911. Jill was bruised up some and was sore. The 2 assholes weren't as lucky both of their dicks had cuts. Joe had 3 broken ribs. Robert had one broken ribs and a broken wrist. The sheriff questioned all of us. Sam and my story matched claimed that they were half asleep. I didn't get arrested. The car wasn't really hurt. Jill was treated and released. Robert and Joe were held over to be watched. I apologized to them but said we were all lucky it could have been worse. They agreed..the 3 in the back got a situation for not having a seat belt on. Later at home Jill was really shook up. I said come hear babe what wrong. Just everything that happened it could have been really bad. I said yes their dicks could have been cut off or bitten off right? She looked at me and said yes they could have been cut off but not bitten off. They were trying to get me to play with them but I didn't they were jacking themselves I didn't touch them I swear. I visited both assholes and had a chat with them. Neither argued with me and I said stay away from Jill. Life goes on.

What a dumbass. Either get away or plant them. Not really not worth getting caught.