by Raging_Vixen
As erotica goes, once that knife went in, cut her, and started bleeding, the sensuality was gone! eeek!
Pushing the blade into the vagina? And you call that erotic? This story is only for the twisted written by a psycho. You should have put this in the erotic horror. That way I would have never bothered reading it in the first place let alone left this comment here. You ask for it.
It was pretty hot until he cut her. But rape generally isn't pretty. No need to the author out. Oh, and any one who would even click on the "non consent" has pretty twisted, fucked up minds. :)
you truly are CRAZY to ass the knief to this. it was great until that happened
It was a great story until he put in the knife. That ruined it.
the knife part made me wince a bit. If you want violence in a rape scene, slapping or binding is ok, but no girl is going to get turned on by a knife in her vagina!!! Do guys get turned on when they get kicked in the balls??
Otherwise, a really good story good description good order of events.
The knife was over the top inside her,but otherwise a good story.Got my cunt wet
Clearly this "author" has no idea of female anatomy. The vagina is a soft collapsable tube if you will. Any effort to "slide" a knife up there would have caused immense trauma and immesurable pain. Not to mention the possibility of bleding out in a few minutes. Suggest you stop writing sch drivel!
Take the knife out of the story, and it would have been good, but that was going too far. To Anonymous in USA, you clicked on it, so what does that make you - pillock.
Adding the knife there went your story. That was NOT erotica that was horrible.