All Comments on 'Taken Ch. 02'

Good.

Pretty good. Right up until you used "Tuna-like". Ugh.

Wtf where did the tuna reference come from?

Thank you guys for the feedback. I really appreciate comments and will always read them. I will take them into consideration as I am currently re-editing the story. I'll post the new non-tuna version in a couple days!

<3 Tara

tuna like!!! well she IS a virgin so maybe she didn't know hahahah

Why do virgins not know what tuna smells like? Or did her virginity just effect her sense of smell?

She gags at the taste of her own cum? *eyeroll* I bet you can do better than that :P

Me and my gf did this and I made her cum so hard, except, I actually did fuck her after

Good, plenty of potential for more seduction and sexual toy action interspersed with more use of the chloroform pad, so I look forward to Part 3.

She has an std or bv it smells like tuna