All Comments on 'Taken in by Demons'

good story, but reread it or have someone edit it.

I agree about an editor. The world's greatest writers have an editor. I know for my own writing, once I've read and reread my own stuff, my eyes began to glaze over. The work can always use a second pair to scrutinize the grammar, spelling and story content. It can only make it better. You've done well...