All Comments on 'Taken: The pedestrian Ch. 01'

by DarkMoonSpawn

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
One minor technical point!

12:05 P.M. Pacific time is the middle of the day.

DarkMoonSpawnDarkMoonSpawnover 8 years agoAuthor
Missed that...

You're right, thanks for the correction.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Moar please

Hope for more fun, maybe with sex toys and orgasm torture/denial)

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Erotic Horror ?

Does Any writer, in this category understand what Erotic Horror Is ??? We get Gay Male and Lesbian Sex, WHERE is the Erotic Horror in That ?

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Minor issue..

Chase is tied to the bed. Chase then grabs on to your waist. Does Chase have an extra pair of arms that you forgot to tie? (In which case this should be in an Alien category).

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