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Click here"Cum for me, Violet."
And she did.
She threw her head back and cried out as an orgasm ripped through her. Pure bliss tore through the girl's body, much to her kidnapper's delight.
"What do you say to your Master, Violet?" he asked smugly as his hand retreated back to her thigh. Her chest still heaving from the comedown of her climax, Violet just managed to catch her breath back enough to respond.
"Thank you, Sir." As she watched, Seth brought his cum-soaked fingers to his own mouth and kissed them lightly, before settling them on her shoulder and pulling her tighter into his embrace once again. Violet was completely spent, so much so that she snuggled into Seth's hold and closed her eyes. Thus, the captive fell asleep in the unexpected, unconventional, yet undeniably comforting embrace of her captor.
- COMMENTS
OneMoreStoryPleaseover 1 year agoThank you, WhisperingLilac. Based on your comments, another proof of what Anon meant, clearly misunderstood by others is this: Imaging the news announcing that Paul from the Beatles has been knighted by saying that he is now
Master Paul McCartney. Why not? Because they are not synonyms in modern usage. Thanks for your writing!
WhisperingLilacabout 4 years agoAuthorThanks to Charley, Unrighteous and the anons for their feedback! I ended up bowing to pressure in the end in regards to Sir/Master, but I did find it really fascinating to read everyone’s insights. I wonder if it’s a cultural thing; I’m from the UK and the only people I ever called ‘Sir’ outside of the bedroom were some of my school teachers (maybe that’s why I like using it!). But all your advice and musings help my writing develop, so thank you for all your input.
~WhisperingLilac
Anonymousover 5 years agoRe: master vs sir. He's the master, so he chooses what to be called. Wouldn't matter if he wanted to be called Larry. It is about him controlling how she speaks.
You are doing an exceptional job with his mood swings. For some characters, these ruin them. It shows weakness of character development. Here, the rapid and wide swings are a crucial part of him. They make him a strong character. Crazy as all fuck, but strong.
Unrighteousalmost 6 years agoMaster is such a overused word I'm glad it's not too prevalent in this story. Silly anon getting upset by silly things.
Anonymousover 6 years agoTo me the story lost its potential to be an erotic classic when , yet again, the often repeated, anti-erotic and erroneous cliche of using Sir as a synonym with Master made its regrettable appearance. To wit:
"I am your Master, Violet. I expect you to call me Sir. " Really? I am your master so don't call me Master? Sir, In unquestionable modern usage, means we can call anyone on the street or elsewhere a Sir and we don't mean Master!
