All Comments on 'Takeover Ch. 03'

Sad, emotional, good, but little bit short :)

Can't wait for the fourth chapter! The suspense is killing me, please keep going!

I'm a huge fan of your work and your ability. I've read everything you've done and have yet to be dissatisfied...until this one. I've been reading thus far in the hope that the protagonist would become at least somewhat likeable but I'm just constantly left with a meandering indecisive asexual timid man-boy. I'm not against male vulnerability and your other works do this expertly but this character is so bereft of charm and some form of mind that he feels borderline optimized. I'm sorry if that comes off harsh as I am a true lover of your work but I'm giving up hope on this one. I'm sure we'll realign on the next as you're too talented to lose your appeal as a writer. Thanks again for the other great reads. Cheers.

Optimized=lobotomized. Auto correct eh?

I know the fetish is in the role reversal (amongst other things, boys kissing? Why not? Everyone has had an experiment phase anyways) but idk, not the best chapter but still kudos for trying! Also, this is so freaking gay - not in a bad way just...blegh (probably just antsy for the sexing)

mmm... put gay in the description so people know.... that ending was real gay

Rich people’s games are different. 5.

Great character development, but uh...do people ever fuck in your erotica?

this story is weird as fuck. why am i reading gay erotica? this shit was not in the description. if i wanted to read gay erotica i would fuckin type in GAY in the search bar. disappointed