All Comments on 'Taking a Walk'

Way to quick at looking and then into the house.

2 hours of fucking your ass? Sure that's believable.

Then he screwed 2 more hours?

Not good..sorry

With your untrained writing skills, tackling the tried and true "black gangbang" scenario was doomed from the beginning. Such familiar content that you chose to write about can only be reintroduced by a writer who can skillfully, through plot and character development, grab the reader's interest and hold it, incorporating new twists and different perspectives. Unfortunately, you were unable to accomplish this with your story. Another 3 star effort.

this is really bad

Could have been a great story; but, you overdid it. 2 hours of him, 2 hours of him, etc. Too much.

I would truly enjoy taking that walk and wish it would happen. However, I'd be quite happy if each of them gave me 10 minutes. 30 or 40 minutes of being a sex slut for 3 or 4 black guys would be a dream cum true.

This was such a good story. Please do more with more details