All Comments on 'Taking Advantage of a Situation'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Great story

That was good. Now have him go back in and fuck her good and knock her up. Then she can think, were did this baby come from...

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
enough already

I shouldn't bother to continue. Not much of a story, shows no narrative development, no characters pretty much no nothing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Too soon to know

You didn't post enough for us to tell whether or not more is welcome. At this point, there has been no significant character development, and the action has been rather tame. At least another paragraph beyond where you stopped is necessary to know whether or not more is worth reading.

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