All Comments on 'Taking Advantage, The Family's Story Ch. 02'

Enjoying it so far but could really do with longer chapters.

Good continuation and story setting but a bit more elaborate story and character build-up really wouldn't hurt, longer chapters and clear distinction between Amanda and amber would be nice too.

4* for now.

Interesting start, but PLEASE find an editor. Disparately is not the same as desperately, and I don't think you used their / they're right once. Totally detracts from the story. And I second the request for longer chapters.

One page does not a chapter make. Hold off on publishing until you really have a full chapter.