All Comments on 'Taking Amy Ch. 02'

Your fans deserve more than one page after 9 months!

Now I want the story of Amy in the backseat of the car.

What a lovely experience for Amy.

Anna

Just ridiculous. Thankfully you didn’t inflict any further literary pain on the world. Good for you! In doing so you showed compassion for the reader. Very unselfish of you and I wanted to say thanks.

Incredibly bad. Sorry but there is nothing in this that feels the least bit authentic. Even the actions of the characters makes little to no sense.