All Comments on 'Taking Ashley's Virginity'

by Whiskey_Rose

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
editing needed

one short simple sentence after another. try a compound sentence now and then

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
good start

looking forward to the next installment

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
I liked it, felt realish.

. Being interupted mid coitus, shy girl bed of her body type. I've been with girls like that before, with rocking bodies that just need a gentle push to release their inner sexy beast. I'd love to hear of a continuation.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
More please

Hope you'll write more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
erm no...

...ashley gets horny 2 mins after not allowing her boyfriend to see her tits?

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