by KatieAnnBB
Excellent job, very good writing. It started appropriately slow and tentative for both of them and built up nicely. Would love to read more daddy-daughter from you!!! :-)
good build up, every event was given a reason to happen without boring the reader. Organic chacters, with realastic reactions. Calling the ex to try and sate her needs before running up to her Daddys bed was far more nautral than makeing a bee line to incest . 6 stars.
Your characters are living, breathing human beings with very real doubts, fears, passions and needs. A great, great story.
I don't know what it is exactly but there is something about this story that makes it one of the best I've read
There are so many good romantic stories here like this one...can't someone make films out of these stories... Not just porn movies but romantic and erotic.
The overall story was fine but there were parts that could be deleted to tighten the story a bit (scene about the eating out could go away, for instance) and the switch of POV from daughter to father was jarring--add a row of asterisks to show a break.
Normally, I get aroused by incest stories, but don't actually consider that I would ever be involved in one. After all, they are pretty far outside of societal norms, and often tend to harm those involved. But I have to say, the way this was written, I could almost see how it would be a loving and helpful relationship for both.
I know that is most likely just an excuse for an old guy to get laid by a hot young babe, but still, a good story.