All Comments on 'Taking Care Of The Pool Man Ch. 02'

by tikusair

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bgtrkdrvrbgtrkdrvralmost 16 years ago
I think you are wasting your time

you are an atrocious writer. Please find something else to do with your time

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Great Writing!

We enjoyed it!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Started well, but then

The story was enjoyable until the end when you wrote, "after knowing what real men felt like and the pleasure they could give". Give me a break! The wife could have enjoyed another man (or men) without the husband feeling less of a man.

don87654don87654almost 15 years ago
Sickening!

Even though your wife is Asian, this fact does not allow for her to be knocked up by a niggah.

As a general rule, Asians look at niggahs as being some kind of jungle monkey and treat them as such, including the half niggah ones that are produced by this kind of rape. This story is definitely disgusting in content!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Rude

Very Degrading.

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