All Comments on 'Taking Chances Pt. 01'

It's always a pleasure to read a story that flows well, has a good set up and storyline. Not having to trip over bad spelling and punctuation are two added bonuses that make your stories stand out. Thanks. I hope to see part 2 soon.

(if you ever decide you'd like the use of an editor/proofreader I'd be happy to volunteer even though it appears you don't need much help).

Can't wait to read more of your story!

What a very fascinating protagonist/heroine(?) you've created in Kelly. She really is a "...bin there, done that..." kind of person. I'm really looking forward to the next part(s) to see how she and the story develop.

Loved the beginning, if the rest is like that, I can't wait for the next tattoo.... Thanks for sharing!

Mmm I like this story. Good introduction, interesting. I'm all giddy about the possibilities. I have a feeling it will be hot as fuck.

This story has a very promising future. It makes me more ready than ever to get back to work on my own writing. Looking forward to more. Love all your stories.

Had to check on this bikie gangs and im scared to hell, this is a load of .... Puh name it i cant find a name for this kind

Another great start...