Taking Chances Pt. 02

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Shaima32
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"On my arse," she handed me a business card, "that's the gym. If you mention my name I get a twenty five percent discount and the first session is free."

Muzza stared after her as she left the shop and I managed a crooked grin.

"A white rose on her arse? Now that I have to see," he looked at the card, "things must be getting serious between you too."

"Not exactly," I replied, "she's spoken with her old man, he's a retired cop and they think they can get me into the C.F.A. I'd need to get fit though."

"You in the C.F.A?" Muzza stared at me, "fuckin' hell, I can just see you charging into a wall of flames with a hose. So, when's all this happening?"

"I have to go to some family birthday with her on Saturday to meet the father, her older sister is in the force too, and her other sister is a lawyer."

"Fuck me," he looked me up and down, "you want a bit of advice?"

"Depends on the advice," I smiled crookedly.

"Get some wardrobe tips, you might pass muster at a bikie bash but these sound like decent middle class people. Bet you haven't even got a dress."

"I do," I protested, "I just haven't worn it for a while."

"It probably doesn't fit any more."

That's what I love about Muzza, if I ever get too big for my boots, he'll cut me down to size. He was right though, I only had one dress and what I call my court suit. The rest is all button down shirts, tee shirts and jeans.

Which is where my nanna stepped in to bat. The moment I blurted it out that night, she told me to keep Friday night free.

"Why?"

"We're going shopping down at Knox City, we'll eat down there tomorrow night."

To be continued...

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okami1061okami1061almost 2 years ago

Still quite on track...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Slow - but excellent

Love the whole story, I don't mind the lack of sex at all. I just wait and see. Keep up the (very) good work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Looking forward to the upcoming chapters, of which i hope there is many.

Great story line so far.

I dont feel it is to rushed just yet. Although if you do slow the pace it will mean more for us to read!

As alway though I'm happily at the mercy of the authors choice.

Your previous submissions have always impressed and i see no reason to expect anything less than yet again.

xo

MaonaighMaonaighabout 7 years ago
A bit hurried?

I'm not denigrating your writing (which is excellent as always) or the plot-line but this chapter was a bit short and lacking depth for my taste. It reads almost as if you were in a hurry to get the part submitted and so chopped it off before you were quite ready. Whatever, I'm still looking forward to part 3 because all of your stories to date have been first-rate.

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