All Comments on 'Taking Chances Pt. 04'

It's nice to see that they're together now, albeit sexually... it will be nice to see it get deeper! Thank you!

i hope there is more .i wish you the best.

I enjoyed all four chapters.

...Shaima, I'm running out of superlatives for your stories. Guess I'll just have to sit down with a thesaurus and do some serious studying. Story-line and writing top notch as always, can't fault anything. Looks like we've come to the end for our heroines but if you can think of future adventures for them they'll be welcomed back.

Your story is fabulous, but the passion you show is better than I have ever read! I hope you continue on with your story and tell it like you have done so far, with laughter, love and daily caring for others around your life! You are a GREAT writer, please keep up the compassion !!!

I have enjoyed the series. Thank you and continued success

Out of everything you could've done, you went and made Muzza a Hawks supporter??

I had started reading this series earlier, and was waiting for the other chapters. They did not disappoint. This is a very good, very readable series, and I thank you for sharing it with us!

Well written but not as good as most of your stories.

5🌟's

Feels like a Fantasy! Great little story. I bet if it were real or it may well be, the two would make a beautiful couple. Keep it up!

I'm glad to see you have some recent postings. I've also read Delicate Touches. I still have that tab open. That brings us to the present. I loved how Kelly and Jody didn't rush and enjoyed how you brought in important people and occasions as the story evolved. Story and character development are important to me. The sex is icing on the cake. You told that part so well.

I like longer stories but you accomplished a lot in 4 short chapters. You are now in my favorites. I have a lot of catching up to do.

With your talent your extented stories, extension in pages, are filled with so much more intense of all kinds so im deeply drawn into ..... Fabulous

Well done! I especially like the slow, teasing build up that left Kelly wondering if and when she would finally get the chance. You definitely know how to keep your readers interested. I will definitely be reading more of your works

Lovely story, I really enjoyed getting to know the characters gradually.

There you go again ... taming the butch 💋